11 February 2009

Poem Dedicated to H


I BELIEVE I've been mistaken-that girl is taken
I thought i could let her go
Let her be on her own
But I found out
That i can't do without her touch, her kiss, her love.
She is more precious than a treasure trove
I can't believe that I made the mistake
I thought I could fake
Not loving her, and letting her go.
But now I know
That I've been mistaken
And there is no sense in faking
That my love for her is more than I knew
And I know what I have to do .
Please let me have one more chance
So that we can dance
The one special dance
The one called love.
Jack©

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

hey dude, improve ur english a bit b4 u write a poem. think tiwce b4 u take a step. i cant understand a shit inside ur poem. seriously got no meaning inside. i cant feel the content of ur poem dude. ur grade is around C- i think (below than average)

Anonymous said...

hey dude, improve ur english a bit b4 u write a poem. think twice b4 u take a step. i cant understand any shit inside ur freaking poem. tat's a meaningless poem wif a lot of grammar mistakes. ur poem in the ungraded catogary. good luck dude. looking forward for ur IMPROVED version.

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